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Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-ldapbis-models-03.txt
Hi,
I reviewed draft-ietf-ldapbis-models-03 and found some issues in its ABNFs:
- RFC2252 allows an arbitrary number of spaces in the definition of oids
between LPAREN, DOLLAR and RPAREN. However, draft-ietf-ldapbis-models-03
requires exactly one SP to be present. I changed SP to WSP in definition of
oids and oidlist to give the RFC2252 behavior. This is also consistent with
the definitions for similiar tokens in draft-ietf-ldapbis-models.
- the rhs of list definitions was optional, which would allow an empty list
(e.g. "NAME ()").
- BTW: The current form of *list definitions allows a list to only contain
one element. This allows both "NAME 'cn'" and "NAME ('cn')". Is this
intended?
- typo in the definition of qdescrs
- definitions for qdstrings and qdstringlist were missing.
- typo in the definition of QS
- typo in the definition of ObjectClassDescription
- the description text of the "DESC" tag seems mangled
- missing parens in the definition of ruleids
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Norbert Klasen
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