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RE: draft-ietf-ldapbis-bcp64-01 comments
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-ietf-ldapbis@OpenLDAP.org
> [mailto:owner-ietf-ldapbis@OpenLDAP.org]On Behalf Of Kurt D. Zeilenga
> >Section 3.8 (Directory Systems Names) says:
> >
> > The IANA-maintained "Directory Systems Names" registry
> [IANADSN] of
> > valid keywords for well known attributes used in the LDAPv2 string
> > representation of a distinguished name [RFC1779], now Historic
> > [RFC3494].
> >
> >Please insert a verb in this paragraph. (Or is "used" the verb? I
> >couldn't parse it that way.)
>
> I'll s/used/was used/
Better would be to replace ", now Historic" with "is now Historic" ...
Grammatically speaking, anyway.
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